IELTS Writing Task 2: Bài mẫu cực hay cho dạng đề Agree or Disagree đạt Band 9.0 (Part 1)

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So với IELTS Writing Task 1, để có thể hoàn thiện bài viết một cách hoàn chỉnh thì Task 2 luôn là phần thí sinh cần phân bố thời gian nhiều hơn. Tuy các dạng đề của IELTS Writing Task 2 thường không khó. Nhưng để đạt được band điểm cao, các bạn phải chuẩn bị thật kỹ càng nha. Ở bài viết này, EFA Việt Nam sẽ chia sẻ tới bạn 10 bài mẫu cực hay cho dạng đề Agree or Disagree (nêu lên opinion) để đạt Band 9.0 nhé! Còn chần chừ gì nữa mà không tìm hiểu ngay thôi nào!

IELTS Writing Task 2

“Agree or Disagree” là dạng đề khá phổ biến và chiếm từ 60%-70% trong Writing Task 2. Trước tiên, để có thể chinh phục dạng đề này, công việc cụ thể cần làm là gì?

  • Tìm hiểu về template viết bài.
  • Chuẩn bị trước các idea cho chùm chủ đề hay ra.
  • Trang bị từ vựng học thuật vững vàng.
  • Chăm đọc các bài mẫu band cao để học hỏi.
  • Luyện viết bài thật nhiều để hoàn thiện kỹ năng.

Sample Essay dạng Agree or Disagree:

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1. Đề bài: Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Bài mẫu:

Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with this view.

For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay for private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount of tax reduction for these families, and staff would be required to manage this complex process. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for public services that we may not use. For example, most people are fortunate enough not to have to call the police or fire brigade at any time in their lives, but they would not expect a tax reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax discount for sending their children to private schools, we might have a situation where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich.

In my opinion, we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that supports public schools. It is beneficial for all members of society to have a high quality education system with equal opportunities for all young people. This will result in a well-educated workforce, and in turn a more productive and prosperous nation. Parents of children in private schools may also see the advantages of this in their own lives. For example, a company owner will need well qualified and competent staff, and a wellfunded education system can provide such employees.

In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for people who choose private education.

(269 words, band 9)

2. Đề bài: We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Bài mẫu:

Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.

On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.

At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.

In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.

(280 words, band 9)

3. Đề bài: Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

Bài mẫu:

Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.

Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.

At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.

In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.

(250 words, band 9)

4. Đề bài: Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Bài mẫu:

It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea.

The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going, which means that the resident population already pays money to these sites through the tax system. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel. The governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to visit them.

If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on holiday. To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor Castle or Saint Paul’s Cathedral. These two sites charge the same price regardless of nationality, and this helps to promote the nation’s cultural heritage. If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important buildings.

In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to attract tourists from overseas, and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local residents.

(269 words, band 9)

5. Đề bài: Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Bài mẫu:

In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every university subject.

Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.

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Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it is surely wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications.

In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.

(265 words, band 9)

 

Xem thêm: IELTS Writing Task 2: Bài mẫu cực hay cho dạng đề Agree or Disagree đạt Band 9.0 (Part 2).

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IELTS Writing Task 2

Hy vọng bài viết này có thể giúp bạn hiểu rõ hơn về dạng essay nêu ra ý kiến của mình –  “Agree or Disagree”. Đừng quên khám phá thêm về các bài viết mẫu khác mà EFA Việt Nam đã biên soạn để có thể tự tin chinh phục IELTS Writing Task 2 nha! Còn nếu cảm thấy tiếng Anh quá khó khăn thì sao? Quá trình đạt điểm IELTS đối với bạn có quá xa vời? Vậy thì đừng ngần ngại mà hãy để EFA Việt Nam giúp bạn nha. Các bạn có thể liên hệ ngay tới EFA Việt Nam để tìm hiểu về các lớp luyện thi IELTS offline/online phù hợp nhất với mình nhé!


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